Amazing work! I really liked that you used eclipse to create/build up suspension.
I liked the way you described how you felt
I really like yours you did a great job
You was great at building up tension. Next time maybe you could think if the monster was threatening the family would you be happy or sad.
i liked the way you used the …
I like your paragraph a lot because it is very entertaining.
thank you for recommendations
One thing to improve is to put your full stops in the correct order. Thank you. But overall, it was a very good entry!
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Amazing work! I really liked that you used eclipse to create/build up suspension.
I liked the way you described how you felt
I really like yours you did a great job
You was great at building up tension. Next time maybe you could think if the monster was threatening the family would you be happy or sad.
i liked the way you used the …
I like your paragraph a lot because it is very entertaining.
thank you for recommendations
One thing to improve is to put your full stops in the correct order. Thank you. But overall, it was a very good entry!