I like that you used true facts. You could use capital letters in the right place.
I like your story because it has good use of game knowledge.You could improve on punctuation.
U did well at describing the trees.
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I like that you used true facts. You could use capital letters in the right place.
I like your story because it has good use of game knowledge.You could improve on punctuation.
U did well at describing the trees.