Hello buluh 1 your story was great it really put a smile on my face but one thing you could improve on is really focusing on the story line you chose. Thank you
I like the part when the tree messages his friend because i found it funny.
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Hello buluh 1 your story was great it really put a smile on my face but one thing you could improve on is really focusing on the story line you chose.
Thank you
I like the part when the tree messages his friend because i found it funny.