the day the trees came alive

2 Responses to the day the trees came alive

1. knitl says:

   February 26, 2018 at 2:42 pm

   Good use of ly starters. Such as luckily.
2. khann says:

   February 26, 2018 at 2:57 pm

   Nice work! What you were succsessfull at was you said the story nicely. What you can improve on more discriptive lughage and you can use elitive clawes to make more informatoin.

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