Hi Siddm,
This is a very intriguing story! I like the way you’ve included some description of the figures to help the reader imagine they were there. Your use of so many questions is also effective in drawing the reader in and making them wonder that for themselves. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK
Hi Siddm,
This is a very intriguing story! I like the way you’ve included some description of the figures to help the reader imagine they were there. Your use of so many questions is also effective in drawing the reader in and making them wonder that for themselves. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK