I liked how you build up the tension in your story. Next time maybe you could proof read to make sure it makes sense.
nice work
I like your title its very engaging.
Good work but make sure that it makes sense by re reading.
like your story make sure it makes sense next time
nice job I liked it when you used the hero’s in.
i like your work.
I like the way you made your story quite exiting with a super hero and a villain you could improve on making sense.
I like the way you used capital letters but what I think you could do better, is to make sure it makes sense.
I liked when you expressed your feeling and emotions.Next time you can improve on making it sence.
i liked the way you expressed your feeling but next time you to add more detail
I liked the way you used emotions .
It was excellent,however,you could use ed and ing openers and re-read to check it makes sense.
nice imagination but tell me where they turned to stone.
What an action-packed story! Great work!
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I liked how you build up the tension in your story. Next time maybe you could proof read to make sure it makes sense.
nice work
I like your title its very engaging.
Good work but make sure that it makes sense by re reading.
like your story make sure it makes sense next time
nice job I liked it when you used the hero’s in.
i like your work.
I like the way you made your story quite exiting with a super hero and a villain you could improve on making sense.
I like the way you used capital letters but what I think you could do better, is to make sure it makes sense.
I liked when you expressed your feeling and emotions.Next time you can improve on making it sence.
i liked the way you expressed your feeling but next time you to add more detail
I liked the way you used emotions .
It was excellent,however,you could use ed and ing openers and re-read to check it makes sense.
nice imagination but tell me where they turned to stone.
What an action-packed story! Great work!