Nightmare Dream

5 Responses to Nightmare Dream

1. alif says:

   February 5, 2018 at 12:50 pm

   A very good story i enjoyed read this.
2. rahms1 says:

   February 5, 2018 at 12:57 pm

   I really like how you expressed your feelings and made lots of tension
3. haqua1 says:

   February 5, 2018 at 12:59 pm

   I love the way you used those ellipses in the end of the story. However, think about if your using past or present tense.
   • suhas says:

     February 26, 2018 at 12:41 pm

     I only used past. I think.
4. aziza says:

   February 26, 2018 at 12:53 pm

   I love the way you used those eclipses in the end of the story.However, think about if your using past or present tense.

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