i liked the word dimly as it shows an image in my head and emotions the character was feeling.
I think your story was amazing you used a lot of ed and ing openers which really made the story good. You could improve by not missing your capitals
this was a good text because by yousing patois in your writing
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i liked the word dimly as it shows an image in my head and emotions the character was feeling.
I think your story was amazing you used a lot of ed and ing openers which really made the story good. You could improve by not missing your capitals
this was a good text because by yousing patois in your writing