The Stone Family

10 Responses to The Stone Family

1. hania says:

   February 5, 2018 at 12:47 pm

   I like how you started its like a news report
2. husss says:

   February 5, 2018 at 12:49 pm

   I liked the starting point
3. shahz says:

   February 5, 2018 at 12:53 pm

   I liked this story because its show lots of good words. But next time try to make it sence
4. aziza says:

   February 5, 2018 at 12:54 pm

   I like the way that you were making it sound as if you were a news reporter.
5. jibrj says:

   February 5, 2018 at 12:58 pm

   I like the way you made it engaging with the words you used
6. rahmz says:

   February 5, 2018 at 2:56 pm

   its good
7. hussz says:

   February 5, 2018 at 3:00 pm

   good newspaper article , you showed good detail of what happened to the family who turned to stone .
8. islat1 says:

   February 5, 2018 at 3:02 pm

   I liked how you made it like a news channel.
9. burnl says:

   February 5, 2018 at 6:27 pm

   I like how you made it quite misterious.
10. Mrs. Wlazlo in NY, Team 100 says:

    February 11, 2018 at 5:31 pm

    Love your take on the prompt–turning it into a news story.
    Great work!
    Keep writing 🙂

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