Wow! What a great story and excellent use of the prompt words. I love your accompanying picture too. I’m going to recommend this story for showcase. Well done.
excellent work well done
wow! amazing writing.
what a creative story! well done
wow really good description
i like your writing! I also like the suspense which you have added in your sentence
* I like your use of the picture at the end,
* I like your use of the challenge words,
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:)))))) very good wow
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