Noise, Noise, Noise

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2 Responses to Noise, Noise, Noise

  1. rgreenslade says:

    I really like the phrase “in the middle of the noise of children”. It seems to me you have used it cleverly to mean literally they were in the middle of the group of children but also as a way to describe their feelings of being separate and apart from the children. What a great piece of writing. Next step? Openers!

  2. islaa says:

    I agree. Next story means new and improved openers.

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