THE LIGHTS…

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2 Responses to THE LIGHTS…

  1. islaa says:

    I hope you liked my story. Please do tell me in the comments if you liked it and anything I could remember for my next story.

  2. smarino says:

    I like how you built up tension towards the end of the story – I wonder if you could have continued to build up the tension, especially since I had questions about how your mum came to be out looking for and why you were in the woods after dark on your own…? Great writing – look forward to reading your next piece!

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