Hi Siddm
Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I was quite intrigued by your approach to this prompt and wonder how your online payment app would work. Are you interested in developing apps? Or are you advocating changes to Pay-Pal? Your persuasive writing is very good as it is making me think about how I pay for things online!!
Keep up the great writing.
Ms McKenzie (Team 100WC, Christchurch, New Zealand)
Hi I’m Jess and am a year 8 I am from OIS (Oamaru intermediate school) NZ I like your post I was really good if you want to check out our class blog here is the link http://rm5ois.edublogs.org/
From Jess
Hi Siddm
Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I was quite intrigued by your approach to this prompt and wonder how your online payment app would work. Are you interested in developing apps? Or are you advocating changes to Pay-Pal? Your persuasive writing is very good as it is making me think about how I pay for things online!!
Keep up the great writing.
Ms McKenzie (Team 100WC, Christchurch, New Zealand)
Hi I’m Jess and am a year 8 I am from OIS (Oamaru intermediate school) NZ I like your post I was really good if you want to check out our class blog here is the link http://rm5ois.edublogs.org/
From Jess