Hi,
What a great idea. What an incredible sight it would be to see trees dancing, especially if it was everytime one got chopped down. They’d never stop! A couple of bits of advice: I think you mean ‘stumps’ rather than ‘stomps’ and ‘stops’ when talking about the trees. Also, try not to overuse the exclamation mark, it is very unlikely that seven sentences in a row would need one. Good use of the ellipsis at the end and some great word choices that get across the mood of the situation. Well done 🙂
Hi,
What a great idea. What an incredible sight it would be to see trees dancing, especially if it was everytime one got chopped down. They’d never stop! A couple of bits of advice: I think you mean ‘stumps’ rather than ‘stomps’ and ‘stops’ when talking about the trees. Also, try not to overuse the exclamation mark, it is very unlikely that seven sentences in a row would need one. Good use of the ellipsis at the end and some great word choices that get across the mood of the situation. Well done 🙂