The living Stick Ninjas

Posted on February 24, 2018 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to The living Stick Ninjas

  1. ahmea says:
    February 26, 2018 at 2:55 pm

    i like this because it had relative clause 😀

  2. Mrs. Trivedi-Ziemba (Team 100 WC, USA) says:
    February 28, 2018 at 4:27 pm

    Frans,

    I enjoyed reading your story. Nice way to bring winter in the composition. Do you think the “spell” wore off at 5? Will the stick Ninjas will be OK or are they under some influence?

    You may wish to have peer edit the draft to make it more enjoyable.

    Happy Writing.

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