The living Stick Ninjas

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3 Responses to The living Stick Ninjas

  1. ahmea says:

    i like this because it had relative clause 😀

  2. Mrs. Trivedi-Ziemba (Team 100 WC, USA) says:

    Frans,

    I enjoyed reading your story. Nice way to bring winter in the composition. Do you think the “spell” wore off at 5? Will the stick Ninjas will be OK or are they under some influence?

    You may wish to have peer edit the draft to make it more enjoyable.

    Happy Writing.

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