I really liked the the way you changed he story added a twist . You made it about the third best thing in the world [my opinion] cats and that was really nice. You added a lot of detail and made it adding a passive voice and active and this story is the best I have read so far so thank you for making it amazing and special because I really liked your story it was very descriptive and you used capital letters when you said stone and that impacts the reader a lot and as I am also a reader reading this the story impacted me too and I love this.
I like that your tittle wasn’t about stone family but it was about a cat. I cant find any improvements for you
I really liked the the way you changed he story added a twist . You made it about the third best thing in the world [my opinion] cats and that was really nice. You added a lot of detail and made it adding a passive voice and active and this story is the best I have read so far so thank you for making it amazing and special because I really liked your story it was very descriptive and you used capital letters when you said stone and that impacts the reader a lot and as I am also a reader reading this the story impacted me too and I love this.