I like how you started its like a news report
I liked the starting point
I liked this story because its show lots of good words. But next time try to make it sence
I like the way that you were making it sound as if you were a news reporter.
I like the way you made it engaging with the words you used
good newspaper article , you showed good detail of what happened to the family who turned to stone .
I liked how you made it like a news channel.
I like how you made it quite misterious.
Love your take on the prompt–turning it into a news story.
Keep writing 🙂
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